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A Story..Well by ME!!
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A Story..Well by ME!!
by Sʏᴅɴᴇʏᴍᴏᴜsᴇ♥ Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:14 pm
This is FAKE story i just love writing stories and this is also a sad story!! It teaches you a lesson. The lesson is.. Do not cross the street when its a red!! Even if you need to go get something!! You can get another ball!! (whatever is on the street) but you can't get another YOU!!
CHAPTER 1
One day, a girl walked with her dog cocoa. She was playing fetch with her dog in her backyard. When she threw the fetch really hard, it went to the street. She ran and ran. There was a red sign. A car was about crash the fetch. She was worried. She ran across the street and tried to get it. She caught it. The ball was there all the time. It was flated into a pancake. But the girl was never seen ever again.
CHAPTER 2
Her dog cocoa waited for her in the backyard. It was silent. So cocoa went outside to see what's happening. Cocoa looked at his fetch. Flated into a pancake. He missed his fetch. But mostly, he couldn't find the girl. He ran inside the house and cried "Woof!!"
Mom didn't know what cocoa was saying.
"Woof! Woof!" Cried cocoa again. Cocoa was thinking there was a monster on the street. Cocoa thought wrong.. Mom was so confused that she needed someone to help her. Dad is am expert of understanding dogs. Mom smiled. "Honey!! Tell me what cocoa is saying!!" Said Mom "Ok " said dad. "Woof!!! Woof!!" cocoa cried again and again. " Sweetheart! cocoa is saying there is a monster!! That killed my lil girl!!" Yelled dad. "Oh no!! Said mom"
CHAPTER 3
NOT MAKING IT!! wait... (:
CHAPTER 1
One day, a girl walked with her dog cocoa. She was playing fetch with her dog in her backyard. When she threw the fetch really hard, it went to the street. She ran and ran. There was a red sign. A car was about crash the fetch. She was worried. She ran across the street and tried to get it. She caught it. The ball was there all the time. It was flated into a pancake. But the girl was never seen ever again.
CHAPTER 2
Her dog cocoa waited for her in the backyard. It was silent. So cocoa went outside to see what's happening. Cocoa looked at his fetch. Flated into a pancake. He missed his fetch. But mostly, he couldn't find the girl. He ran inside the house and cried "Woof!!"
Mom didn't know what cocoa was saying.
"Woof! Woof!" Cried cocoa again. Cocoa was thinking there was a monster on the street. Cocoa thought wrong.. Mom was so confused that she needed someone to help her. Dad is am expert of understanding dogs. Mom smiled. "Honey!! Tell me what cocoa is saying!!" Said Mom "Ok " said dad. "Woof!!! Woof!!" cocoa cried again and again. " Sweetheart! cocoa is saying there is a monster!! That killed my lil girl!!" Yelled dad. "Oh no!! Said mom"
CHAPTER 3
NOT MAKING IT!! wait... (:
Last edited by Sηoωƒʟαкε♥Sƴ∂ηεƴ on Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:25 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Ðucky~Ðiαmond Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:07 am
what happened to her?!?!?!?! did she dissapear??? awesome story btw syd;)
i like to wright storys and i wrote one on here and wanted to wright one every friday but like no people replied so i didn't....
great story!! wright another!!
i like to wright storys and i wrote one on here and wanted to wright one every friday but like no people replied so i didn't....great story!! wright another!!
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Beth Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:19 am
Amazing story,the lesson is important,if it's a shoe,don't go and get it,buy another one
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Frankie♥Vanilla Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:31 am
Awesome Story!
And it can happen at any time, any where.
Nice!
And it can happen at any time, any where.
Nice!
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Sʏᴅɴᴇʏᴍᴏᴜsᴇ♥ Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:02 am
ok im editing what's gonna happen next ;P
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Ðucky~Ðiαmond Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:16 am
good syd!!!! keep going!!!! uhoh..... dun dun duuuuuuunnn!!! (again)
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Eden Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:25 am
LOL! btw syd you are real talented at writing
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by zoeyyourock24022 Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:14 am
amazing!!!! i love that story cant wait for the other part bestie,,
bestie,,
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Sʏᴅɴᴇʏᴍᴏᴜsᴇ♥ Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:21 am
Thanks!! Tell me when u want to hear the next part!!
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Ðucky~Ðiαmond Fri Nov 18, 2011 10:26 am
how about you add too it...... now!!!!!!
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by ƤєαяℓღHєαяts Fri Nov 18, 2011 10:46 am
I just saw and read this and I say MORE! Snowflake
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Re: A Story..Well by ME!!
by Ðucky~Ðiαmond Sat Nov 19, 2011 2:36 am
okkkk fiiinnneee:(
can you add on to ittttt... now???
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