My story of a dog..

Kelsey is a golden doodle dog. She has just turned 1. Kelsey ran into another dog named Beck, Beck had just turned 1 also. Beck is a competing dog which means that he is strong. Beck thought that Kelsey was the one for him. A few days later Beck asked Kelsey to date him. Beck dated Kelsey for 5 years. Then Beck asks her to marry him on the day that they started dating. tell me more if want more

more please (:

Here is chapter 2 and 3 Their wedding was magnificent. They had dog cake and Kelsey got roses from Beck. Their honey moon was in Hawaii. A year later they had twins (one boy and one girl) named Daisy and Hunter. Hunter was very stubborn and Daisy would always be picking flowers and giving them to her family members. Beck got a job as a travel business man and Kelsey was a cook.


Beck was gone for a week that meant that Kelsey would have to send them to school for the first time. Daisy was excited! Hunter wasn’t. So Daisy picked up a few flowers for the bus driver and Hunter slept in and didn’t get on the bus but Daisy told him get on the bus or momma was going to be mad. Kelsey found out that Hunter didn’t go to school and he stayed in the living room until she got home. Kelsey was very mad.

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Ok who wants the 4th chapter?

6*... If it's at the viewpoint of dogs, it iisnt as interesting as people.

I hope people understand the story is about my dog

Fleur why did you say that? O_o
I think its really good zoey keep it coming!

I didn't say it was bad. I said people would have been more interesting, even if it was the same story line...

here you go! Kelsey decided to take the video games away and the TV. Daisy could play outside and hang out with the neighbors but he couldn’t. Hunter snuck out of the house and went to the train station. He hopped onto the first train he saw without a ticket. The person that boarded the people said “ticket sir”? Hunter said “no sir I don’t have a ticket please let me board without one”. The captain said “I can’t let anyone board without a ticket”. Hunter said “but sir! Let me board please I have to run away from my parents because they will ground me.”


The captain said “alright son but you have to pay me back” then the captain winked. “Thank you sir” said Hunter. Hunter got on the train and asked the person next to him where he was going. The man said “we are going to Brooklyn don’t you know that?” Hunter replied “sir I have no idea where I am going.” The man replied “where are your parents?” Hunter replied “sir I left my parents because they were going to ground me.” The man said “you better hop off this train and go back to your parents”. Hunter said “yes sir.”
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