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Re: Writing Academy
Writing example: http://www.bearvilleplayground.com/t958-my-story-very-sad-by-fluffycool157
Name; Fluffy♥LouisTomlinson
What level you think you are at; B
Name; Fluffy♥LouisTomlinson
What level you think you are at; B
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Re: Writing Academy
Okay, thanks!
I'll be waiting I'm gonna try to get into Class A
I'll be waiting I'm gonna try to get into Class A
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Re: Writing Academy
Woo thank youu ;d
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Re: Writing Academy
my awesome story!
name: Primcessstar165/funni~bunni~star
i think it might be a looong example xD
story example: Once there was a curly blonde, French nailed, lip glossed, super rich, SUGAR SWEET EVIL GIRL. and once there was a straight autumn colour haired, zebra print nailed, lip balmed, kind of poor, SUGAR SWEET EVIL GIRL’S ENEMY. Now, you all must think this is gonna be one of the stories where they fight the whole time and then the good girl wins. WELL GUESS WHAT? That’s not happening. Nope. I would tell what happens but I don’t wanna spoil the ending. So bye bye for now!
P.S. NO PEEKING AT THE BACK OF THE BOOK YOU CHEATER!
Well well, I see you you didn’t skip every page and went to the back of the book to get it over with. No! Instead you were smart and decided to go and read on! And I’m also guessing you want me to hurry up and start the story. Ok, ok don’t rush me!
It was a beautiful summer day. The Orchids had just moved into town and already they were shouting, screaming, yelling, tears, and possibly if they went too far EVEN DEATH! No, no I’m kidding I just wanted to scare you. But there was yelling…
‘’ BUT MOOOOOOOM! ’’ Amy wailed. ‘’ I DON’T WANNNNNA! ‘’ This time she said it even louder then before. I came down to investigate on what was going on. I followed the voice of my little sister Amy - who by the way is 4 and the most annoy ingest human being (at least I THINK she’s a human being) on this very planet! I continued to follow until I suddenly ended up in the kitchen. ‘’ I SAID NO ICE CREAM UNTIL YOUR ROOM IS CLEANED UP!’’ Mom yelled. I was guessing Amy wanted some ice cream but mom wouldn’t give her any until she cleaned up her dumb room. Ugh!
btw i think maybe i'm in class B
name: Primcessstar165/funni~bunni~star
i think it might be a looong example xD
story example: Once there was a curly blonde, French nailed, lip glossed, super rich, SUGAR SWEET EVIL GIRL. and once there was a straight autumn colour haired, zebra print nailed, lip balmed, kind of poor, SUGAR SWEET EVIL GIRL’S ENEMY. Now, you all must think this is gonna be one of the stories where they fight the whole time and then the good girl wins. WELL GUESS WHAT? That’s not happening. Nope. I would tell what happens but I don’t wanna spoil the ending. So bye bye for now!
P.S. NO PEEKING AT THE BACK OF THE BOOK YOU CHEATER!
Well well, I see you you didn’t skip every page and went to the back of the book to get it over with. No! Instead you were smart and decided to go and read on! And I’m also guessing you want me to hurry up and start the story. Ok, ok don’t rush me!
It was a beautiful summer day. The Orchids had just moved into town and already they were shouting, screaming, yelling, tears, and possibly if they went too far EVEN DEATH! No, no I’m kidding I just wanted to scare you. But there was yelling…
‘’ BUT MOOOOOOOM! ’’ Amy wailed. ‘’ I DON’T WANNNNNA! ‘’ This time she said it even louder then before. I came down to investigate on what was going on. I followed the voice of my little sister Amy - who by the way is 4 and the most annoy ingest human being (at least I THINK she’s a human being) on this very planet! I continued to follow until I suddenly ended up in the kitchen. ‘’ I SAID NO ICE CREAM UNTIL YOUR ROOM IS CLEANED UP!’’ Mom yelled. I was guessing Amy wanted some ice cream but mom wouldn’t give her any until she cleaned up her dumb room. Ugh!
btw i think maybe i'm in class B
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Re: Writing Academy
**Edited**
The Weather Changes...
Well, recently in my state and states/countries its been very warm climates and late spring early summer weather. Not all of this weather has been good, there has been tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and bad rainstorms.. But, luckily I think we all survived all this crazy weather. Now, during these two weeks early spring weather has arrived. My point is it has been getting warmer and warmer! Don't get your hopes up yet, this week, next week, and maybe the week after that it is supposed to get winter weather or at least late fall weather! I've heard news reporters, regular citizens, and celebrities on tv and in my neighborhood say things like,"This is ridiculous!" and,"Can't summer just come and leave winter and fall alone?!" A lot of people around the world are complaining. Hopefully, our summer comes fast and will be hot! So, if you are experiencing this kind of weather I recommend you keep your warmer clothes in your house just a little bit longer. Would you use my recommendations?
The Weather Changes...
Well, recently in my state and states/countries its been very warm climates and late spring early summer weather. Not all of this weather has been good, there has been tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and bad rainstorms.. But, luckily I think we all survived all this crazy weather. Now, during these two weeks early spring weather has arrived. My point is it has been getting warmer and warmer! Don't get your hopes up yet, this week, next week, and maybe the week after that it is supposed to get winter weather or at least late fall weather! I've heard news reporters, regular citizens, and celebrities on tv and in my neighborhood say things like,"This is ridiculous!" and,"Can't summer just come and leave winter and fall alone?!" A lot of people around the world are complaining. Hopefully, our summer comes fast and will be hot! So, if you are experiencing this kind of weather I recommend you keep your warmer clothes in your house just a little bit longer. Would you use my recommendations?
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