Lost In The Woods

okkk lol this is my first story on a form so it'll be bad loooll okk soo here it goes xD

One foggy Saturday in summer
Me, my brother and my sister were walking to the lake.
We had to pass the little burned down cottage, forest and half a mile down the road to get to the lake.
My friend and my brother and sisteter's friends were there.
we brought our cnoos so me and my friend (sinead) got in our cnoos and paddled out.
Then my brother and sister and my friends borther and sister were following us.
we paddled far away from them.
but we got lost.
we saw an island so we paddled over there
there was a woods there so we went into it we thought we saw a hotel so we ran to it But, it was only a cottage but there was food and water there so we went in and ate it.
we heard foot steps so we hid in the cottage an old lady opened the door and spotted us! we got sooo scared

It was sooo bad but comments for more