The Girl Who Came From the Rainbow

The Girl Who Came From the Rainbow

It was the girl who came from the rainbow who put the pot of gold at the end of it.
On Saturday morning Crissy Daniels and Julianne Flomording were feeling extra lucky. Their parents didn't know why until they checked their calender. It was St. Patrick's Day! While the girls were walking back from the park they found a 10 dollar bill each and got a free chocolate gold coin:D The girls were very lucky!

Something caught the 2 girls eyes. What was it? Another lucky thing happening? No.
It was a girl! But not your average ordinary girl, something was different about her. She has hair, eyes, clothes, everything like an ordinary girl. Something was really different and you could tell when she came closer to you.
"Hia, I'm Shannon Rain-," Shannon stopped talking for a minute, then continued," Shannon Raigold." Shannon was hesitating a lot on her words. She had red hair, pointy ears, and a little Irish accent. Was she the girl who came from the rainbow?

"Hi, I'm Julianne Flomording. And this is Crissy Daniels, were best friends " Julianne told friendly. The 3 girls went to Crissy's house and found 6 REAL gold coins! At that time the girls felt extra, extra lucky! They got 2 each. Shannon kind of looked nervous when she got into Crissy's house.
"I've never been in a hoose. Its so cool!" She exclaimed.
The 2 girls laughed.
"Shannon, it's house not hoose," Crissy corrected.
"Oh, I just never seen one before," she replied.
The girls went into Crissy's room. Shannon saw a rainbow on the wall and ran up to it and jumped.
"Ow!! Where's the gold?" asked Shannon.
"Well i'll make one, I guess," Crissy promised.
She got out black paper, scissors, tape, a pencil, and her gold coins. She then sketched out a pot, cut it out and taped gold coins onto the back of it(showing the coins). She then put tape on the back of the paper and stuck it at the end of the rainbow. Did this mean it was Shannon? The actual girl? Try and answer these questions in your comment.

"Hey, Shannon do you want to stay for dinner? You can ask your parents if you could on the phone,"asked Crissy. "Um, better go," Shannon left running not looking back. A note fell, but she never noticed. Julianne and Crissy ran to the note;Julianne picked it up and read it:

Dear Mom,
I love and miss you. Please I want to come home to the rainbow! It's so nice here though. I had met these 2 girls and they helped me through this:D Their names are Crissy and Jullenne wait no its Julianne. I think we've served them when they wanted a rainbow by their houses:D They are so nice!Well i miss you and dad, hope to see you again.
P.S. I learned a word! house!!XDD

"She's from a rainbow? Or is it a town called Rainbow?" Julianne's mind was blank.
"I don't get this!! She has to be from the rainbow. Look: I think we've served them when they wanted a rainbow by their houses:D They are so nice!. "She's a girl from the rainbow!" The girls exclaimed at the same time. Finally "so called" Shannon Raigold was reveled! Her secret was out, what was she going to do?
"Promise to tell no one?" Julianne began the promise. "Promise!" agreed Crissy. It was Shannon! She was the girl who came from the rainbow.

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