The unknown soldier. By: Frankie

By: Frankie.

Chaptier 1:
A new soldier arrives.

Hi. Yeah, I bet you don't know me, and I think that after what I'm gonna tell you now, you're gonna think I'm crazy. Anywho, I'm a girl, Jade's my name. I have always loved history, that my grandparents would tell me, even my great-grandparents, before... you know....
So, where was I? Ah yes, the crazy part about where and what I'm gonna do now. Well, I'm walking right in front of a castle, where soldiers are needed. How do I know this? There was an add on TV. 'Looking for soldiers in our castle!'. Haha just kidding, my dad is a soldier at the castle, and offered me to join the team. So, since I have nothing better to do in life, why not? I go threw the castle doors, two guardiens ask me what I'm doing here? I'm a girl! They found that really weird.
And I replied;
-Listen guardiens of the oh great castle, I'm a girl, wanna be a soldier, move it, or I'm calling my dog.
Obviously, you know what they're gonna do now. Let me pass! Yup, apperently, they're allergic to dogs, ha! So I went threw, into this huge hall, where all I could see were pictures of the king. Guess he was very optimistic... So, I see three girls come running at me, take me by the arm, and bring me to this room, apperently it was the soldiers locker room, I would say. So I changed into armor, and went back to the hall.
After 10 minutes, greeting everyone I didn't know, I went upstairs to find my so called room. And I just got the newsflash that I'm sharing it with someone! Super! Now I can hear a man snore during the night. I unlocked the door, and saw a person in a black cloth. We couldn't see anything besides the shape of its body. So, I put my bags on the other side of the room, on the bed to be exact, turned around, and 'it' wasn't there anymore.

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Chapter 2.

-Wow! Where did 'it' go?! That was so creepy..!
Without any notice, some alarm goes off. Everybody runs out of there 'so called rooms' into the main hall. I followed them. When I got there, SO MANY soldiers were there! I think it was the whole gang! Anyways, the 'kight' as he called himself, got up on a bench, and made a speech. The bench was like this sort of closed seat, with a tube sticking out of there. During all this time, observing the bench, the 'kight' finished his speech. I didn't listen a thing! That obviously comes from school. So every soldier went back to there rooms, and they seemed to think of a plan... I, of course, jumped into the discussion, to try and figure out what happened when I wasn't listening. They explained that an unknown soldier, these people have been trying to find for 5 years, has been seen. And the whole part of being a soldier here, is to find that guy. I asked for his name, and they said that they didn't know, but they called him; 'The Black Ghost'. Yeah, pretty creepy for a halloween story. They described to me how he looks like, and it was exactly what looked like the man on the bed next to me! And they also told me some stories that happened in the castle 'cause of him. They told me that 5 soldiers have dissapeared 'cause of him. Before you know it, you would scream like there's no tomorrow, and they, you're gone...
Yeah! I think these guys love halloween, not because of the candy, because of the stories! And they also told me that the ghost would always stay in the same place everytime he would hide, but nobody has ever found his hiding place, they say he vanishes.
In the middle of our discussion, someone screams. We all rushed into the room 5 doors away, and the person who was there, wasn't anymore. And a note was lying next to the wall. It said:
'I have one of your soldiers. Leave this castle right now, or everyone shall dissapear!'.
We were all shaking when we read that, and without any noise, the person who was next to me, dissapeared aswell...

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