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Different Paths by Angelika
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How do you like my story so far?
Different Paths by Angelika
Sorry guys for not writing anymore of my other story D; I kinda got uninterested in it haha hopefully this one is better ! So enjoy... get cha some popcorn and soda ....
Part 1:
My feet were aching inside out. My head was pounding and bleeding. I looked up and saw the deep, blue sky. The sunshine was so bright, I felt like I was going blind. I fell towards the ground, not knowing where I was. I heard a crash to the left of me. Something was running after me. I cried and screamed. I ran as hard as I could and didn't know where I was going. The sound of the wind comforted me and made me think of home. Wait. Am I really here?
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Part 1:
My feet were aching inside out. My head was pounding and bleeding. I looked up and saw the deep, blue sky. The sunshine was so bright, I felt like I was going blind. I fell towards the ground, not knowing where I was. I heard a crash to the left of me. Something was running after me. I cried and screamed. I ran as hard as I could and didn't know where I was going. The sound of the wind comforted me and made me think of home. Wait. Am I really here?
Say More if want me to write more!! (:
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Maddie- Epic sage bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
I woke up in a sweat. The bed sheets were like 200 degrees, making me even hotter. My mother came running into the room, screaming, "Carissa, are you okay?" I said, "Yes, mother." I sighed and got out of bed. My clothes were wet with sweat so I changed clothes. I heard the sound of my dog barking and birds tweeting. I drank a whole cup of coffee and watched my favorite show, Good Luck Charlie. My mother cooked me breakfast and let me eat it on the couch. She said, "Carissa, I have to leave today for work. Will you be okay staying home alone?" I said, "Yes, mother." But on the inside, I was getting a little scared.
Cheeto♥- Royal bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
MORE!!!!!!
Tabi the Potterhead- Epic sage bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
MORE! It’s good!
Maddie- Epic sage bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
MORE! It’s good!
Maddie- Epic sage bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
I wonder what will happen to her when her mom is gone
Tabi the Potterhead- Epic sage bear
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
Moar!!!!!!!! lol spelling wrong on purpose
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Re: Different Paths by Angelika
I watched tv for a while, wondering if anyone was outside. The house was cool, like snow. The house smelt like a fresh, clean mint. I was still in my pajamas and sitting on the couch. I want my mom to be here. I got my phone and I had two messages:
Mom:
Carissa!!! Are you okay??? I heard someone just got killed on our street!! Please call or text me back. I love you
Random number :
Hi Carissa. I'm coming for you.
After that last message, I started to panic. I made sure all the doors were locked and had the alarm system on. I had my dog, Chocolate, in the house with me. I hid under my bed with Chocolate and called 911. All I heard was a beep beep beep. The signal was dead, I'm trapped.
Mom:
Carissa!!! Are you okay??? I heard someone just got killed on our street!! Please call or text me back. I love you
Random number :
Hi Carissa. I'm coming for you.
After that last message, I started to panic. I made sure all the doors were locked and had the alarm system on. I had my dog, Chocolate, in the house with me. I hid under my bed with Chocolate and called 911. All I heard was a beep beep beep. The signal was dead, I'm trapped.
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