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Eden's New Story!
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Eden's New Story!
Okay guys, so remember my last story? Yeah, that one. You don't remember, huh? (LOL). Well, I wasn't really into that style of writing. I just thought of it at the top of my head. I don't type my real stories, since, well, I don't want them to be plagiarized D:. So, I think of some other stories. So, I'll start a new one. I hope I'm into it, LOL.
Chapter 1
Hi there, my name is Alexis Fish. I live with my mom, my dad, wait..not really my dad, hes not really around. He would rather go out late at night, around 7:00, and not come back until 4 am. Whenever I'm in my covers at night, I wonder why my mom never had the guts to have a divorce with my dad. She deserves much better than my dad. My name is Alexis Fish, and this is my life story.
Chapter 1
Hi there, my name is Alexis Fish. I live with my mom, my dad, wait..not really my dad, hes not really around. He would rather go out late at night, around 7:00, and not come back until 4 am. Whenever I'm in my covers at night, I wonder why my mom never had the guts to have a divorce with my dad. She deserves much better than my dad. My name is Alexis Fish, and this is my life story.
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It was 5:30pm. I was sitting at the dinner table with my mom. You guys are probably wondering what about my dad? He doesn't leave until 7! Well, hes upstairs, relaxing in his room, getting "ready" for the night. I picked at my salad and was watching my mom. She always had a smile on her face, but I don't think shes smiling in the inside.
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I gave my mom my salad and sighed. She ate the salad. I gave my mom a hug, ran upstairs, and closed my door. I thought to myself, boy, my life is strange.
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More, and I'm sad about your other story!
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Sorry Zoey D:
I ran to my bed, and just sat there. Then, I heard my dad yell, "Alexis come here!" I thought to myself, whats the occasion? My dad never asks me to come in his room. I can only go there with my mom, sometimes, at night. My mom went upstairs since she wanted to hear what her husband wanted to tell Alexis. Alexis walked in her parents' room, with her mom by her side. I had happy thoughts in my head. Maybe my dad wasn't going to go out, or never go out ever again! Maybe he wanted to become a real family! Then, my dad asked me to get him the remote. I walked up, got the remote, and threw the remote at him.
I ran to my bed, and just sat there. Then, I heard my dad yell, "Alexis come here!" I thought to myself, whats the occasion? My dad never asks me to come in his room. I can only go there with my mom, sometimes, at night. My mom went upstairs since she wanted to hear what her husband wanted to tell Alexis. Alexis walked in her parents' room, with her mom by her side. I had happy thoughts in my head. Maybe my dad wasn't going to go out, or never go out ever again! Maybe he wanted to become a real family! Then, my dad asked me to get him the remote. I walked up, got the remote, and threw the remote at him.
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I ran out of the door and took a shower. I don't think my parents noticed that I left the door open a bit, to listen to what they were saying. My dad was yelling. I could hear what he was yelling. He was yelling, "This is why I didn't want to have a child! They think its all about them!"
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I started to cry. I turned off the shower, ran to my room, slammed the door, and put on my pajamas. I left the door open a little bit. I was hoping my mom would stick up for me. My mom said, "I know Bert, I know. Shes quite a lot to deal with." My mouth opened, in disbelief. I thought my mom would stand up for me. I knew what I had to do, now.
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I looked in my closet for big bags. I didn't feel like looking for my luggage. I packed everything, my clothes, my sheets, my stuffed animals, everything that I owned.
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I changed my outfit. I put on sneakers, shorts, and a shirt. I then threw my pajamas in one of my bag. I thought about if I should bring my cellphone. Then I thought, thats a big no-no. They could track me down, and then I would have to come home!
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I had a plan. The first day of school started tomorrow, so I'll just camp out at the house tonight. I put back on my pajamas, and fell to sleep.
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